Sunday, May 29, 2011

MetalMark -- Six Sentences #7


It's been a while since my last six! I thought I'd post more from MetalMark:

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One by one, he tongued and lapped, cleaned the juice from her fingers. Unfocused until now, he’d experienced the endless want, the itch he couldn’t scratch, once a month, but he’d never known this depth of desire before. Her essence, salty mixed with the berries, gave him a hunger for more. Jazz slid closer to him, her breathing hot and heavy on his neck as he leaned forward, intent on the blue smudges on her breasts.

His lips touched between her breasts and small bumps rose on her skin, rough against the long lick he made around and around the stain.

Her hands clutched him tight against her, and the ache of his loins, heavy and wanting for days, brought a rumble from his chest

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27 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

A month? I'm sure he's very sexually frustrated. That is one hot six!

Liia Ann White said...

Ooh saucy

Gem Sivad said...

Licking is good. *nodding*

Spicy six!

Jennifer L Hart said...

Steamy six!

Carolyn Rosewood said...

WOW! Super hot six! Well done!! :)

Marie Dees said...

Ooooh, hot six!

Ann Mayburn said...

Woo hoo! That is hot!

Sandra Sookoo said...

Steamy 6! I hope this is the beginning of the end to his fast!

Ella Drake said...

Thanks, all! Let's just say I love torturing this hero!

Liz said...

HOT! HOT! HOT! Think the temperature in my house just rose a couple of degrees!

Taryn Kincaid said...

HOT!

(So...he goes into heat once a month? Love it!)

Lorien Velez said...

HAWT snippet! Love your description. :)

Graylin Fox said...

Hot and steamy. Love it!

Ranae Rose said...

Oooh...a hot 6!

Rebecca Royce said...

Oh my goodness, that is hot. Loved it.

diannehartsock said...

Delicious six. Wonder where his tongue will lead him? :)

Sarah Grimm said...

Whew, hot six!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Hot! Hot! Hot! And I adore the imagery, fab six!!

Susanna Fraser said...

Great six, packed with sensual details

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Delicious scene. But I'm wondering about the significance of the month. Why? Good tension here.
Sandy's Six

Lynne Murray said...

Holy blueberries--hot six, great use of senses!

Lindsay said...

Guess it's time for another cold shower. That's hot.

Jacqueline said...

Wow, nice...licking is good anytime...hope he gets what he is licking towards...nice sexy 6

Meg said...

OOOH, HOT!! Great six!

Lori W. said...

Very interesting imagery, and lots of tension. Nice!

Hailey Edwards said...

Oooh I'm a fan of licking and being licked. ;D

Pippa Jay said...

Wow!