Last week, we left off with...
...the prince asked, "Red?"
Her hand shot to her hair before she could stop it. Used to the mane that fell midback, she hadn’t considered the impact it would have on a Brutusian. The entire race had black hair and green eyes until they attained the status of elder when both turned silver. Since the infestation of the biomechanical MetalMark, the turned citizenry shaved or cut short their hair to leave the back of the neck bare.
Bright auburn hair, free and long, had to be a sight this prince had never seen before.
Her hand shot to her hair before she could stop it. Used to the mane that fell midback, she hadn’t considered the impact it would have on a Brutusian. The entire race had black hair and green eyes until they attained the status of elder when both turned silver. Since the infestation of the biomechanical MetalMark, the turned citizenry shaved or cut short their hair to leave the back of the neck bare.
Bright auburn hair, free and long, had to be a sight this prince had never seen before.
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Very cool, Ella.
I'm really hooked. Great six and I'll be back for more.
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I wonder what situation she'll find herself in due to her hair. Great six!
This snippet has left me with loads of questions.. very intriguing! Cool.
What a great example of world building using only a few sentences. I'll be back for more!
The red hair is going to get her in trouble, isn't it? Love your six!
~Sarah
I love your writing!! Can't wait for more! :)
I'm hooked and have an idea of the world you created just from these six. I want more.
Great visual...very intriguing!
Nice job of pulling me in!
Nice snippet. I totally want to read more!
Very erotic use of such a simple gesture. Love it!
What a unique world this is! I can't wait to read more.
Excellent world-building. Love the way you got the heroine's description in, even though we're in her POV, and also trickled in info and backstory! Nicely done!
That's great! I like the read.
I'll definitely have to come back and read more, and I can't wait until I can read the whole thing.
But of course, he's going to fall in love with the exotic beauty now.
Love it Ella!! Already she's getting into something....I see trouble ahead!
Great six! I read last week's, too, and I want to read more.
Oooh and I bet he wants to run his fingers through it. *purr*
(Also, my captcha was "geocide." That can't be good.)
Interesting world-building! Great six.
I like the description of her hair, bright auburn, free and long.
Really great descriptive writing. I love it Ella.
I can't wait for MetalMark! I hope next week brings about snippet.
Fabulous snippet. I'm intrigued! Love the cultural shock issue and can imagine what an oddity she must be in his world. I wonder if he finds that a turn on or a turn off?
Awesome title, too. Hope you post more next week.
Oh dear! What is going to happen next!?
Lovely description and worldbuilding!
I somehow think he'll learn to really love long red hair.
Sounds like the Prince is going to love, love, love the hair!
Can't wait to see more from this wip. :)
I bet he likes it :)
Ooh, really cool. I want more of HIS reaction. Great 6! And worldbuilding too--woman!
Yay for auburn hair! Is it a good thing to be 'different' here tho? :-O
Great six--love the dangerous hair!
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